Monday, December 24, 2007

A Light

Snow fell like the whispers in the back of the room
When she entered
Accumulating
Susan would just dig out again and wait for the warmth
Of the daylight to melt it all away
Music danced down the street
And couldn’t even be silenced by the cold winter’s wind
It was Thursday and his night
He could have his two malts and enjoy the tunes
A good song was like a good draft
Enjoyed while listening/drinking
But left around too long it would go flat
His thoughts were interrupted by the unlined young voices next to him
A low rumble about something Susan had done
She was a friend of his
Friends are better than diamonds
Diamond worth is artificially controlled by just a few
Friends are like the beauty of the night sky
Owned by all
Starshine was a gift
The TV was blaring a news item
A cheetah was found by a farmer just on the other side of his fence
It wasn’t dead on the face of Kilamenjaro
Just a lifeless fur coat tangled up in wire in the dust
The smooth browed environmentalists were up in arms about the loss
Of habitat
They were picketing the farmer for encroachment
A body lay dead in an alley
It didn’t even have a fur coat
A shopkeeper complained about the smell
No one knew its name
But shoppers had seen a homeless person hanging on the corner
Just days before
No one picketed the alley
As he left the bar the first few snow flakes began to fall
He felt the cold uniqueness of each flake hit his face
An individual flake is lost in the crowd that falls
And either melts on contact or is smashed together with the rest
Susan waited for the phone call that wouldn’t come
She stared blankly out of her window
Doing the dishes
Disconnected
A slow smile crept over her face
The stars made the sky not so dark

5 comments:

Bubba said...

Wow, Harry... this touches so many emotions, covers so much ground that it boggles my mind. You are so in touch with all the elements of structure, that like your starshine, this is a gift. Thank you, Harry...

Word Catalyst Magazine said...

I love your perceptions and your finely tuned awareness to life's happenings and mishappenings. An emotional, beautiful and thought provoking poem.

Jo Janoski said...

I agree. You put so much into a few words, streaming along, tugging at the senses and telling a story to boot. This is one of your best, I think.

Dan Shields said...

Nice work! You seem to be in a writing frenzy. Keep it up. I love checking it out.
Danny

Dan Shields said...

Hey,
I liked it too. I wish I had read it sooner. You seem to be in a good place writing wise. Keep it up!
I know I owe you a call. We'll catch up next week
Danny